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My Hospital Friend
Contributed by
O7NeVeS
on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 07:08:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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He works inside of a hospital
And gives his patients Tylenol
Hes a patient care technician
But I can see him as a magician
Hes real sweet with his patients
And for that he must have patience
Cuz hes been nothing else but sweet
Meeting him has been such a treat!
I hope we can hang out more
Cuz when hes around I can soar
Flying high above everyone else
He makes my heart want to melt
Hes almost as sarcastic as I
And always looks me straight in the eye
Hes also a bit of an actor
With his sign that of a cancer
We get along so well
That my grandma hears wedding bells
But Im not too concerned with it
Because softballs we shall hit
Im just looking to have some fun
Hopefully some fun in the sun
I know this poem must sound corny
But I must write when outside is stormy
Im afraid this poem has come to an end
With Brian being my hospital friend
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O7NeVeS
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2005-01-08 19:08:05]
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Re: My Hospital Friend
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by autumngreeneyes on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 05:32:36 PM AEST
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I always start with zeros..they are my hero's ..LOL. I hate to see a write with no comments..so I started here. I thought this was really cute. You said you don't know anything about poetry..so I won't talk about forced rhymes..that's just when you kind of push two words together that don't really rhyme and you make them? Like midas muffler.."We'll make it fit?" LOL..it 's legal..it's what you did with corny and stormy.. a good link is http://www.rhymezone.com/
but the poem was really cute and I felt your happiness and your emotion..see how full of bull I am?? that's all you have to do to comment..rotflmao.. you're from NYC?
that should be no problem..my ex is from there.. |
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Re: My Hospital Friend
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by Dec2three198five on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 11:25:44 PM AEST
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| Brian? He's new. How did this poem come into being written? 33 |
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