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The Angel
Contributed by
Seikjo
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Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 08:00:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I sat there on a high cliff looking down. "My life is a lie." I said as I neared the edge. Tears stream down my face as I step once. My foot dangled over the air. I let myself go and fly through the air. But I still fell. I looked at the ground rushing to meet me as I thought, "Finally." But i felt myself rise up while a white light blinded what life i had left. When it stopped i was in a beautiful place. a man came up to me and said, "It's not your time to go." I let out a cry as pain evolped me. I was not aware of the poeple running alongside my floating body. I can remember him. That man who told me what i might have needed to know. He's my angel. And just as i looked to the side I see him again. He's the one that found me, laying on the rocks. They say it was a miracle that i lived. But I know that it was angel watching over me. Protecting me, from myself.
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Re: The Angel
(User Rating: 1 ) by afterdark on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 08:20:00 PM AEST (User
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Protecting you from what is what I wish to know..Why did you not just jump off the ledge..Anyhow this worked very well |
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Re: The Angel
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 08:55:00 PM AEST (User
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fantastic write. very powerful. that angel wont always be there though... |
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