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Am I Ready?
Contributed by
O7NeVeS
on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 08:01:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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The cold winter night
Dim with little light
The fireplace glowing
Outside its snowing
Curled up like a ball
Waiting for your call
I try to stay strong
But the wait feels so long
When will the phone ring?
My eyes begin to sting
Holding back the tears
I think of all my fears
I pick up the phone
Yep theres a dial tone
I want to hear your voice
Youve left me no choice
I want to see your face
Wish you were here at my place
I want to smell your cologne
Reminds me of when were all alone
I want to taste all of you
Cuz you like it when I do
I want to feel your body
But youre out at a party
My heart feels like its breaking
Can you please stop the aching?
Why cant you just be stable?
Then wed be able
To be together you and I
Concentrating on our lives
But no, that cant be
Cuz youre not ready for me
Im ready for you
But am I, is this really true?
Copyright ©
O7NeVeS
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2005-01-08 20:01:18]
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Re: Am I Ready?
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by jjones12 on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 08:23:31 PM AEST
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| that is exactly what happend to my friend except she was ingaged to someone that is in the army and in iraq |
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Re: Am I Ready?
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by autumngreeneyes on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 05:41:57 PM AEST
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Ready and Waiting?
Dressed in Ready..
Why Can't You Just Be..
just some ideas...:-) |
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Re: Am I Ready?
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 06:09:57 PM AEST
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| Great write! I enjoyed reading it! |
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Re: Am I Ready?
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by Dec2three198five on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 11:29:28 PM AEST
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| oh i love this poem. I definitely get the meaning of this poem. Very nice. 33 |
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Re: Am I Ready?
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by CurtisC on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 01:52:44 AM AEST
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the picture this made in my mind was really sad...poor little tanya lying in bed, curled up in a blanket...waiting next to the phone, so depressing :( i hope he called u, it would be so sad to think u were like that for long...great poem, i really liked this one.
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