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So You Tell Me
Contributed by
killingmehslowly
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Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 10:03:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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You tell me I'm stupid, ugly and fat But the second I cut it's "c'mere we need to chat" It's like your goal to shoot down my dream And then you have the nerve to wonder why I have low self-esteem You tell me I can't ride, write or sing worth crap Yet when people are near, you tell me i'm good and sit me on your lap I'm sick of these degrading fights I'm human too, I have rights! At least you've helped me to see What a little whore I can be I'm everything I hate Maybe it's just fate That I don't make it to my next birthday After all you've never given me reason to stay
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2005-01-08 22:03:30] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: So You Tell Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 10:11:03 PM AEST (User
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powerful, emotional, and well written write. brilliant. oh well. i think he needs a reality check, because i think you write very well. but hes better off out of your life, why not give him the hint of slamming a door in his face? |
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Re: So You Tell Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 12:57:03 AM AEST (User
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wow this is very powerful and very painful.. I understand how you feel. its tough to go through life when you have low esteem but you are a good person and you will see that someday..
Peace and hope
JENNI |
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