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Ascendancy
Contributed by
o0meg0o
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Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 01:50:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Im always wrong,and nothing's ever right
I cant have emotions,or show any fright
Im kept on an agenda..built by only them
They just dont get it,i am who i am
Everything i do, im meant to justify
Excuses for this,and for that,just a lie.
I know im not depressed,and i swear that im not sad
But the way that they control me,really makes me mad
My explinations couldn't mean less
Im confused and lost,my mind is a mess
Im scared to do this, and worried about that.
"My hair isn't right,and i look kinda fat"
Day by day,it's hard to get by
Im sad or im mad,they have to know why
Its finally easier,and im getting stronger
The pain will end,it won't be much longer
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o0meg0o
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2005-01-09 01:50:12]
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Re: Ascendancy
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 01:54:55 AM AEST
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Good write.
I hope you realized that you don't need critical people that bring you down in your life. No one has the right to control you.
I wish you the best :-) |
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Re: Ascendancy
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by afterdark on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 08:33:16 AM AEST
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| You could have done so much more here with this..More anger or more something..Over all it was good.. |
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Re: Ascendancy
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 23rd April 2005 @ 09:51:38 PM AEST
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| i loved this write. excellent work. im glad i read this. |
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