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My Story
Contributed by
bhav
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Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 12:09:24 PM in AEST
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InspirationalPoems
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I still remember the first time I saw you,
to tell you the truth it was the other way aroundyou saw me.
I didnt know who you were,
for me you were among the many people present there.
The next day was quite something,
across the cafeteria I saw you staring at me and that was quite something.
Our eyes did meet each other,
it seems for years we had known each other.
There was so much to tell,
so much to listen to,
I didnt know life would be so pleasant to.
That day began a story for me,
a story in which I amwhat I am and you are you.
Its the first time I am living a story,
all stories do end at some period of time,
mine has just started,
welcome to an endless, life long story.
A story of love,
a story of faith,
a story of endless silent conversations.
Copyright ©
bhav
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2005-01-09 12:09:24]
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Re: My Story
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by afterdark on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 01:42:04 PM AEST
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A story of love,
a story of faith,
a story of endless silent conversations.
I think this may just be to damn deep for what your poem really is..It seemed to me you were coming at it from to many directions..And since your looking at this person across a cafeteria I can now see why this poem is more a episode of The OC rather then a work of poetry. |
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Re: My Story
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by bhav on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 12:32:38 PM AEST
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Afterdark...
Thanks for reading and liking my poem...Bhav |
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