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Loves Just A Word
Contributed by
devine_xox
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Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 01:32:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Whats in a promise?
If the promise is fake
Whats in the truth?
If lying is your game
Whats in your heart?
If you betray my trust
Whats in a name?
If mines not engraved in your heart
Whats the reason that you fell astray?
For all I gave was love
A commitment till my dying day
What is love if you have no trust?
What is commitment?
If you are not loved
Dont pledge that you love me
Dont ask me to try
Is hard enough
To want to say goodbye
So lets pretend we never did meet
Just vanish from my mind
And give me back my heart
You hand in over in pieces
Now how long will it take
To put it back together
I close my eyes and pray
Now Im locking my love
Away From the world
No one deserves to be hurt
For loves just a word
Whats in a soul?
If the soul is not there
Now Im walking away
Time will surely heel this pain
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2005-01-09 13:32:33]
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Re: Loves Just A Word
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by O7NeVeS on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 03:01:03 PM AEST
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| Sad poem, nice write. TD |
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Re: Loves Just A Word
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 04:10:49 PM AEST
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really moving...... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Loves Just A Word
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by wolfman on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 02:36:59 PM AEST
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it is true that love is just a word, without any emotion behind it but still love it still more then any one can describ. it will take time for those wonds to heel but they will and you will learn to love deeper then before.
this poem was truly amazing, it tells what happens to those who dont get back the love that they give and why it is harder to love tsome one who has been through that. i do wish you the best and i'll pray that you get through this.
be strong. please post again
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