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Rolla Polla
Contributed by
LucisLucy
on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 02:50:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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What did I do?
What did I do?
Mama, Papas gone
Ran away, just today
And theyre taking me back
To the room with white walls
Impossible to move
With the coat they gave me
Cant hurt myself
The walls are soft
But Im still in pain
I dont say a word
But I sing that song we sang
Rolla Polla, My sweet child
Daddys here Mummys here
We wont let you go
Rolla Polla never will you be hurt
You will never feel pain
We wont let you
Rolla PollaRolla polla
You said Daddy was coming home
You said he was round the corner
Buying a loaf of bread
You said the queue must be long
He was tired and must be staying away alone
Not at home
My arms are strapped back
Im given pills everyday
Force-fed everyday
Everyday I sing that song we used to sing
Rolla Polla, My sweet child
Daddys here Mummys here
We wont let you go
Rolla Polla never will you be hurt
You will never feel pain
We wont let you
Rolla PollaRolla polla
He never came home
I left home
I moved right here
Now a girl visits me
Holds my hand doesnt say a word
But always cries
And I dont know why?
But I sang her a song that we used to sing
Rolla Polla, My sweet child
Daddys here Mummys here
We wont let you go
Rolla Polla never will you be hurt
You will never feel pain
We wont let you
Rolla PollaRolla polla
She said goodbye Ill see you later
Just like Daddy did
But she didnt come back
Just like Daddy did
I didnt know her
I didnt know Daddy
But still she left me
Just like Daddy
And now all I do is sit here and sing
Rolla Polla, My sweet child
Daddys here Mummys here
We wont let you go
Rolla Polla never will you be hurt
You will never feel pain
We wont let you
Rolla PollaRolla polla
Sit here and sing
Rolla polla
Rolla polla
Rolla
Polla
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Re: Rolla Polla
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by afterdark on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 02:54:18 PM AEST
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| Could this have went on any longer for God sakes..It would not freaking end..Give the reader a breath here every so often..Your not keeping a decent pace in the write..Your words are all over the place..I get the drift but Jesus shorter stanza's and try making some sense. |
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Re: Rolla Polla
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by LucisLucy on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 02:58:25 PM AEST
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| thank you for your positive influence...some poems I feel need to be the way mine is...I understand what you mean but when I was writing this the words just flowed and wouldn't stop until I finished |
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Re: Rolla Polla
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by hdngfrmthelight on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 04:11:15 PM AEST
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Wow. I liked that. It made me cry. Nice job with the first stanza: "Can’t hurt myself...
but I'm still in pain" |
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Re: Rolla Polla
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 04:42:38 PM AEST
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| Well you might designate the repeating verse as the "chorus" and then put [chorus] inbetween the other stanzas. That'd probably help. It was an interesting story though. Cheers! |
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