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Let go
Contributed by
hdngfrmthelight
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Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 04:07:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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How can I tell you
That this is through?
How can I just stand here
And break it off with you?
We're at the point where winter
Should be melting into spring
But there is no warmth.
I can't feel a thing.
No longer does your hand,
Afford to me its comfort.
It smothers me like molten lead.
It's time that I come forth.
I cannot stay with you, dear one,
If you I co not love.
And you and I are as alike
Aas the crow is to the dove.
These times were bliss,
Yet it was incomplete.
I kow that to the others,
I cannot compete.
So let go of my heart,
And drop me to the side.
For caught here in your grasp,
I cannot be alive.
Copyright ©
hdngfrmthelight
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2005-01-09 16:07:48]
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Re: Let go
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by reprobate on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 04:22:10 PM AEST
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sad
thanks for sharing |
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Re: Let go
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by jjones12 on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 04:34:33 PM AEST
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| thanx for shaing |
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Re: Let go
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 04:37:10 PM AEST
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| Well made. Watch the spelling though! Cheers! |
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Re: Let go
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by hdngfrmthelight on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 04:49:21 PM AEST
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| Sorry about the spelling. I was totally in the zone and couldn't stop typing til the end. |
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Re: Let go
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 03:13:54 PM AEST
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Nice work, but watch your spelling.
Stitch |
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Re: Let go
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by shy_band_geek on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 04:56:30 PM AEST
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wow nice. I'd say if you're afraid to tell him...you probably should send him this.
Wow hun didn't think you could write like this. Nice job! |
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Re: Let go
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 08:38:44 PM AEST
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| another poem that reflects your talent as a writer. a brilliant poem in all respects. |
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