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come closer
Contributed by
darbysue59
on
Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 04:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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come closer
look,see the sky,how blue it is
it is the blue ,of my sadness,the blue in your
eyes,of my tears,i cried over you
come closer
now look,see the emptiness,the hollowness
of my broken heart,the greyness of aloneness
in a future spent,with broken,shattered dreams
come closer
now look,see the shards of broken spirit,the splinters of pain feeding into my mind,as
the drama of fate,directs my fate
come closer
now look,see the desolatipn of life,destroyed
by words,words spoken in anger,by a mouth
filled with smiles of guile
come closer
now, hear,feel the voice of comfort upon my ears,the silent wings of angels,standing
near to me,the arms of joy,descending,to hug
and solice me. the sweet words of love
mending the heart,that was broken by you.
come closer
now,watch,see me stand upright and tall
see me go forth new worlds to conquer
see the blue of my eyes,hope shining forth,
surveying all
come closer
now,see my light shining forth,no longer broken,now stronger than steel
come closer
now see me fly,soar high above,looking down
and about,
see my feet,my path now firm,well trodden
by time and truth and bravery
come closer
now,see me look back,wave goodbye to you
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darbysue59
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2002-12-04 04:00:00]
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Re: come closer
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by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 04:02:07 AM AEST
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good write
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Re: come closer
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by spaceotter on
Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 04:42:29 AM AEST
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I liked the way this poem blossomed. Beautiful write!
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Re: come closer
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 10:23:27 PM AEST
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I love the way this poem went...it's absolutely beautiful...thanks for sharing this one...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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