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Moments by Moonlight
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
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Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 07:24:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Beneath fallen embers of a midnight sky,
Thoughts of you flood my restless mind
I travel this endless sea of anguish,
Alone
Under the moon I sit,
As Im searching for a memory that evades me,
Like a cloud
The winds whisper your name,
Caressing my flesh tantalizingly,
Making me yearn for you
La Luna smiles somberly through my window,
Making me wonder if your precious eyes are lingering upon Her as well
The tragedy of time itself, is more profound than these thousand nights,
Cascading over me
I weep gentle sorrow,
Wishing for your comforting embrace,
Your infinite eyes that seem to hold all the love in the world,
Your presence that shrouds all else
Time alone in this desolate room takes me back
Bittersweet recollections unfold,
And I drown in those moments we shared
Enchanting moments by moonlight
Copyright ©
FleurdeSang
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2005-01-09 19:24:03]
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Re: Moments by Moonlight
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 07:26:25 PM AEST
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| Well so far, it's great! A toast to all such restless minds! Cheers! |
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Re: Moments by Moonlight
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by TheRaven on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 08:27:35 PM AEST
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wow, very nicely written. i think its perfect the way it is, but can't wait to see the addition when it comes. i know this feeling all too well, the restlessness....
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Re: Moments by Moonlight
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by AllSmiles on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 08:34:28 PM AEST
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| Good poem |
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Re: Moments by Moonlight
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by autumngreeneyes on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 09:03:27 PM AEST
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I like everything but the word tantalizingly.. I can't say why exactly.. I just .. don't like it.. but what I do really love is this.
fallen embers of a midnight sky.... that I LOVE |
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Re: Moments by Moonlight
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by pixie on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 07:40:40 AM AEST
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written so well, beautiful and moving
pixie xx |
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Re: Moments by Moonlight
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by sweetangeluk on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 07:32:38 AM AEST
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Beautiful simply beautiful.
Your infinite eyes that seem to hold all the love in the world,
Your presence that shrouds all else…
Time alone in this desolate room takes me back…
Bittersweet recollections unfold,
And I drown in those moments we shared…
Enchanting moments by moonlight…
Romance at its best under the moonlight.
Memories of a love that lives on in your heart.
Fantastic
Love Sweetangelukxxxx
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