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the journey
Contributed by
Candi
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Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 07:38:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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long awaiting happiness
got a long road ahead
weary from walking,
but on i tread
no one for miles
the hot sun smiles down on me
keep walking, it says
keep walking
soon you'll be free
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Candi
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2005-01-09 19:38:50]
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Re: the journey
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by afterdark on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 07:44:42 PM AEST
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| I am sure you know the background here..But it may have helped to have gave a synopsis for the readers..Other then that it was good. |
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Re: the journey
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 07:46:14 PM AEST
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Great poem!
It's so full of hope. |
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Re: the journey
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 08:01:16 PM AEST
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| Not bad. Similar to something I wrote once (but was much longer). Cheers! |
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