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My Last Breath (Reposted)
Contributed by
Jakenstein
on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 08:31:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Everyday
Seems like a waste
Living for nothing
Just taking up space
I draw in my last breath
As I sit and wait for my death
All the time
I'm all alone
I've grown up
In this broken home
I sit here with my knife
Waiting to take my life
I can't take it anymore
So I'll let my body hit the floor
The last thing I'll do
Is leave my bloody mess for you
I don't think anyone will cry
To hear that I might die
The world will be a better place
When it's rid of this discrace
I live my life in vain
Always living in pain
So on the wake of my death
I draw in my last breath
If only you knew
Of all the things I've gone through
You could take away the pain
That keeps driving me insane
Will I take my life tonight?
Chances are that I might
If you don't help soon
I'll have sung my final tune
I'm drawin in my last breath
And waiting for my ultimate death
There's nothing left for me to do
All I want you to know is that I love you
Copyright ©
Jakenstein
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2005-01-09 20:31:50]
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Re: My Last Breath (Reposted)
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by afterdark on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 08:33:48 PM AEST
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| Do you ppl not get tired of writing about offing yourself? The poem was alright..But jump or dont jump.. |
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