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Limits
Contributed by
silverjade
on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 09:18:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Impure thoughts
hateful thoughts
tainted thoughts
Impure thoughts
In my head
In this mind
crazy, mine.
spreading this disease
I live life and feel this
all this pain
tremendous pain
fighting myself
oh no! once again.
In constant fight
god hear my plight
I want to leave
this crazy being
Iam drowned in here
I die in here
I cant be in here
I dont feel real
I restrain myself
I fight myself
I stab myself
and while all of this is happening
Iam just sitting
still in here.
Copyright ©
silverjade
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2005-01-09 21:18:05]
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Re: Limits
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by emystar on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 09:28:53 PM AEST
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Very interesting, unique, and very thought provoking.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Limits
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 09:46:53 PM AEST
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| seems like i go through this everyday. too bad ignorance is a killer, or id turn to it. excellent poem by the way. |
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Re: Limits
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 10:19:29 PM AEST
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| It's different and portrays emotional pain. Cheers! |
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