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One more time
Contributed by
Dragontear27
on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 12:42:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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It does not matter what I do
and it doesn't matter what I say to you
for all the thoughts that once were mine
I just wanted to be with one more time
all the days that were set in a line
I just wished you could have been mine
and for all the visions that came to my head
it's clear to me now that you are dead
because all the things we did before
still made me hunger for somthing more
that thing was you and you aren't here
and living without you is my fear
I look back deep into past
hoping this dream just wouldn't last
this hellish nightmare inside my mind
I wish would be just one more time
Copyright ©
Dragontear27
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2005-01-10 00:42:39]
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Re: One more time
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by autumngreeneyes on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 01:58:45 AM AEST
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| It seems that in the first and last stanza a word is missing..unless that is your intention? |
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