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and the world came crumbling down
Contributed by
nate
on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 01:09:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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i think life could be so easy,
i think its hard cause we let it.
i think that everytime i walk over,
the world comes crumbling down,
i think i enjoy rejection,
i think i walk face first into it,
i think that every time i try,
the world comes crumbling down,
i think when you think its hurts me,
its hurts me more not to know,
i think we need the pain, the sadness, and the depression,
to make us grow,
i think that every time that you move,
the time stops in its place,
i think that the gods are in aw,
cause your more then a pretty face,
i think that the world comes crumbling,
every time that i speak,
i think the world was meant for every,
other person but me,
i think that life is the prelude,
the prelude to death,
i think we never know the truth,
we just seek to impress,
i think asking nothing,
is asking too much,
and i believe that everything in grasp,
is right out of your touch,
i think that i think,
a little too much,
and i think every time i smile,
my world comes crumbling down,
i think that no one understands,
i think that nobody cares,
i think i care to little,
maybe the problem lies right there,
i think im confused,
i think that life could be worse,
i think im waiting to be put down,
cause im used to it by now,
i think that everythings simple,
but a little too deep,
i think that we should pay a lil more attention,
to the ones who do not speak,
i think i hold the crown,
but every time i put it on,
the world comes crumbling down,
i think im seriously ugly,
i think im unconfident,
i think it was stripped of me,
but im too self concious to try and get it back,
i think my world came crumbling down,
with too many pieces to glue,
i think i should give up trying,
and leave my thoughts up to you,
i think its hard to cope,
i think the attempts should have worked,
i think i was a mistake,
i think the heart of the broken,
is a lil harder to break,
i think that lifes already over,
we are trapt in pergatory,
i think that im not the same,
i think that every time i dream,
my world comes crumbling down,
i think my enhanced character is a mistake in its own,
i think im paying for my past sins,
i think i made my mistake by trying to be nice,
and i think that everything ive done till now,
cause the world to come crumbling down. ..
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nate
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2005-01-10 01:09:06]
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Re: and the world came crumbling down
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by CurtisC on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 01:20:33 AM AEST
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| wow, thats pretty intense. i liked it a lot though, you have a lot of interesting views :) |
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Re: and the world came crumbling down
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by autumngreeneyes on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 01:56:42 AM AEST
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| Why do you use small case i(s) .. is it a statement...? |
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Re: and the world came crumbling down
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 06:26:29 AM AEST
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This is really good, just wished you could use a period to end one sentence. it seems to be a never ending poem with all the comas its just my thoughts tho.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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