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Lies always come out
Contributed by
mia
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Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 04:05:15 AM in AEST
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Think & think harder
where does lying get you?
Does it get you far, does it make you feel better.
Lies come back..........theres no point
what the hell were you thinking?
how could you lie to my family?
I was going to find out anyway!! i may be younger but did you really think i was that dumb?
It's shameful to know you
I should of listened to others
I was told you were a liar & you cheat
You told me different
i was stupid for forgiving you
I'll make sure i won't do that again.
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mia
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2005-01-10 04:05:15]
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Re: Lies always come out
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by Bridget_theMidget_Powerz on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 04:07:15 AM AEST
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| hits him were it hurts, good job. |
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Re: Lies always come out
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 04:37:41 AM AEST
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| whoo hoo! this rocks and i can relate. all men are liars and sometimes we give em a chance and they dont deserve it, we treat em too well i say! anyway excellent write! very emotional, well done |
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Re: Lies always come out
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 06:10:25 AM AEST
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I like the concept of the poem and the flow is ok but you do have to check your spelling.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: Lies always come out
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by sweetangeluk on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 05:36:31 PM AEST
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A woman's instinct hardly ever wrong. Such a sad yet wonderful poem Mia
Hope it gets better for you soon
Love Sweetangelukxxx
Sweetangelukxxxx |
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Re: Lies always come out
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by Kellros on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 02:14:14 AM AEST
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| Emotion makes you blind to the truth so does being in love. Be more careful next time, in the movie Equilibrium they say that uncontrolled emotion is chaos. |
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