|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
emotional enjoyment
Contributed by
holy
on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 09:27:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
|
emotional enjoyment
we are standing
between the land and sky
emotion is living
midst yours and mine
how many red line drag in heart and heart
cannot break off with enlace and entwine
green hills accompany white clouds
love is faerie upon faerie
i am flying with you
being a happy swallow
merrily and merrily
singing in the high sky chicly and freely
in as much
leave each other momently
will be cannot debar
let us keep our love in all the test
and go through everything
i am missing you so much
take pains to wait for you
till the moon become roundish
then my thought will be sweet more and more
Copyright ©
holy
... [
2005-01-10 09:27:00]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: emotional enjoyment
(User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 09:32:28 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
emotional and lovely,
pixie xx |
|
|
Re: emotional enjoyment
(User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 12:16:35 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
till the moon become roundish...I like that.. although I think you forgot the s at the end of moon..
Yes..till the moon becomes roundish..that sounds so nice.. well done.. what a nice, soft, gentle thought. |
|
|
Re: emotional enjoyment
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Thursday, 20th January 2005 @ 10:37:26 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I live the feel of this..like joyously flying with wings of love and longing.
Great job! |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
