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VI
Contributed by
bopeep
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Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 09:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You've spent endless days inside my head.
A feeling I hate to dread.
For sometimes i fear,
Tht you will never be here.
Please be true.
Forgive me if I seem like a brute.
I wish for this to never be through.
I wish I could spend a moment with you.
So rhyming isn't my style.
Just sue me and I'll put it on file.
All I ask for is your smile.
To me you are the lily of the Nile.
I love you my dear.
Even though sometimes I fear,
That you will be the cause of a tear,
But if only you were near.
Copyright ©
bopeep
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2002-12-04 09:30:00]
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Re: VI
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by nightrider on
Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 03:45:35 PM AEST
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| awe! |
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Re: VI
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by frozensuicide on
Saturday, 7th December 2002 @ 10:49:14 PM AEST
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oooooooooooh!!!!!! i know who this is about!!!!!!!!!!!!! its good you should send it to him if ya havent!!!!!!!!!!!!! so how ya doing? pretty good love the rhyming! tootaloo~
huga moose!
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Re: VI
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by Sarah22 on
Tuesday, 10th December 2002 @ 11:20:02 PM AEST
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| good work on this poem . |
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