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Rape Your Bible
Contributed by
kratur
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Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 12:00:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I see you there under the fat mans seat Perfect, bound in leather and embroidered in gold I think about you and I start to feel the heat My mind is gone and my soul is sold
Your silky scales are so smooth on my hand God, I want to have you right now I hear the hypocrite preach about the son of man Yea, I am going to do something that is not allowed
I have you in the bathroom and no one is here None of your holiness will stop me from craving you I wont be quiet and I dont care who hears I will violate you till I rip you in two
My hand and my gratification make a cross But it does not mean that the Bible is not a lie You are my muse; you advocate my fountain of ivory dross I was aiming for the crucifix but I hit Jesus in the eye
I hate you because you say I will burn with red-hot coals But I love you because you promise me wings Now you writhe in my manhood as you teeter on the toilet bowl And I look down on you as the new god and king
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kratur
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2005-01-10 12:00:31] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Rape Your Bible
(User Rating: 1 ) by Arsenic on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 12:10:47 PM AEST (User
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Very disturbing. What's the "fat man's seat" reference to? |
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Re: Rape Your Bible
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 12:16:50 PM AEST (User
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Its . . . its . . . ugh. HIlarious? Repugnant? Enthralling?
All the things a provocative poem should be.
5 ivory stars. |
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Re: Rape Your Bible
(User Rating: 1 ) by OnAngelswings on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 01:14:17 PM AEST (User
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this for me is a wired one...sorry your a good writer but the poem is on the warped side... |
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Re: Rape Your Bible
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 01:24:41 PM AEST (User
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well I'll say this for you, that was surley different, if you have gone for shock tactics then it worked lol :) |
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Re: Rape Your Bible
(User Rating: 1 ) by declinefoale on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 04:21:23 PM AEST (User
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It wasn't what i thaught it was gonna be like, i think it was good though. maybe this will cause a stir??!! (i hope so) |
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Re: Rape Your Bible
(User Rating: 1 ) by LevyMetal on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 04:46:16 PM AEST (User
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Nobody could really figure how to discribe this poem. So here it is, this was another amazing poem from Kratur. I share similar feelings for the bible and end personally enjoyed this write. You express your emotions in mature, creative, provocative ways. For that, you earn much of my respect. |
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