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The Result Of Love
Contributed by
Daniels_Princess
on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 03:48:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Deadly silence
Heartfelt destruction
Blood shot eyes
From which these tears fall
Painful manipulation
Arbitray desecration
Disease ridden limbs
I no longer walk, I crawl
Copyright ©
Daniels_Princess
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2005-01-10 15:48:31]
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Re: The Result Of Love
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 04:25:02 PM AEST
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| well it's pretty dark and hopeless but a good write nonetheless... |
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Re: The Result Of Love
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by Daniels_Princess on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 04:40:02 PM AEST
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| it was what I was feeling at the time, but now Im in a relationship thats actually going somewhere. Thanks very much for the reply and your words. |
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Re: The Result Of Love
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by afterdark on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 05:27:26 PM AEST
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| Very dismal and dark,,in which case I liked it.. |
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Re: The Result Of Love
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by autumngreeneyes on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 05:30:59 PM AEST
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| it got you published? can I borrow it? I'm stalled right now..my last book is out of print.. I wanna be published again..waaaaaaaaaa |
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Re: The Result Of Love
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 05:50:23 PM AEST
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| And you should be proud of it. It's very good. |
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Re: The Result Of Love
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 06:23:29 AM AEST
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very sad poem,deep and emotional
pixie xx |
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Re: The Result Of Love
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by Daniels_Princess on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 03:30:54 PM AEST
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| Thank you very much to all those who have replied. I am very proud of this peice. I had entered a contest through the International Library of Poetry, never thinking once that I would actually have the chance to be published, and be considered for Poet of the Year. But I was truly blessed, and maybe through that others will come to love my work. Ive been writing since I was about in the 1st grade. Im now in the 9th, and my work has VERY much improved, lol. But, again--to all those who replied thank you very much. |
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Re: The Result Of Love
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by Jinxxx_Luck on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 03:49:31 PM AEST
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| this poem was tiiiiiight as hell u know who i be....Daniel aka holm3z |
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Re: The Result Of Love
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by Daniels_Princess on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 06:04:56 PM AEST
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| Thanks bubba, means alot! :) |
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Re: The Result Of Love
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 11:17:29 PM AEST
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Awesome poem. Very short but full of emotion.
Scott |
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