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Judging Pain
Contributed by
CodyJ
on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 05:28:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Vampiric children,
go into the night.
Bleed away
your angstfull might.
Razors, teeth,
piercing nails,
find the flesh,
make it pale.
Bite your soul,
makes you whole,
or so you say,
as you bleed away.
Here comes some pity
from a cynical guy,
if you want some pain,
I'll make you cry.
I'll give you my fists,
show you real pain,
why not let me do it,
isn't it the same
as hacking your skin
you won't win
fighting the mirror,
does it make you see clearer?
Does it make you feel better?
Does it make your tears wetter?
Why pretend
if it all ends
this way
grab a knife
make it stay
produce some pain
in unlimited dearth
bury yourself
six feet in the earth.
Copyright ©
CodyJ
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2005-01-10 17:28:48]
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Re: Judging Pain
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by DesolantDreamer on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 05:31:16 PM AEST
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| that is really good. very deep. I like it. I really do. |
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Re: Judging Pain
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by autumngreeneyes on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 07:33:31 PM AEST
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| dearth rhymes with hearth but not with earth..??? |
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