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Remembering Halley
Contributed by
Crimson_Rose
on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 06:37:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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They never knew what was wrong with her,
She kept her heavy emotions bottled up inside
Halley never risked telling her problems,
In paralyzing fear of the outcome
Her problems came from school,
Other people teasing her because of their own insecurities
None of her friends even knew,
If they did, she would still be alive
Halleys parents found her one-day,
They stormed up to her room,
Ready to yell at her for no reason
Her father soon opened the door
A bottle of nameless pills was in her ashen hand,
The bottle had been tagged full,
But all the round, white pills were gone
She had over dosed, hoping to suffuse her sorrow
Mom & Dad stood with their eyes wide open,
When closed, a waterfall came rushing
A penetrating scream filled the emptiest places of the house
Her father sadly kneeled to her, and held her limp body
Halleys diary was later found,
Were she had confessed all her issues
She wrote a letter there, saying sorry
Her diary was kept, in her loving memory
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Crimson_Rose
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2005-01-10 18:37:07]
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Re: Remembering Halley
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by jjones12 on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 07:22:51 PM AEST
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i think that poem was awsome it mad me cry,i feel like you were talking about me.
well it was great!
=Jen=
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Re: Remembering Halley
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 09:43:26 PM AEST
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| powerful and well written. excellent message. |
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Re: Remembering Halley
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 06:20:11 AM AEST
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such a strong message, very powerful and hard hitting poem,
pixie xx |
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