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thirteen
Contributed by
pUnKa_RaCh
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Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 07:43:14 PM in AEST
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sometimes it seems too hard/ to be happy and carefree
not knowing what to do with myself/ through this rain i cannot see
and sometimes it seems too hard/ to smile
to be a kid without a care/ of my inner angst you are all unaware
this is real tiring/ dont think i can stay
so come on/ anyone take me away
thirteen/young and dumb
(chorus)
i like it/ im not gonna cry
im alone/im not gonna cry
so happy/ im not gonna cry
im helpless/ im not gonna cry
drowning in my pity/ it all seems unreal
a future unknown and dangerous/ somebody tell me what to feel
this is real tiring/ dont think i can stay
so come on/ anyone take me away
thirteen/ young and dumb
(chorus)
sometimes it seems too hard/ to be happy and carefree
not knowing what to do with myself/ through this rain i cannot see
its as if these years are endless/ smothered in my tears and strife
am i honestly the only one/ that wishes for a different life?
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Re: thirteen
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by afterdark on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 09:05:11 PM AEST
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| Ok I am still waiting for the song..Waiting..Wait..Not there. |
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Re: thirteen
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 09:06:46 PM AEST
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| needs to be formatted differently, but other than that very good. |
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Re: thirteen
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by MorbidDeath on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 02:36:40 AM AEST
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| i thought it was a very good write and really explains how it feels to be a teen i dont know how'd u'd sing it if its suposed to be slow or fast but as for your writing i thought it was great |
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Re: thirteen
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by BrokenAngel on
Friday, 4th March 2005 @ 07:39:24 PM AEST
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This is exactly how i feel and im 13 i guess all 13 yr olds feel like this once and awhile. For me its all the time. But newho great write I'd love to hear the song itself though ya know with music.
_Broken Angel_ |
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Re: thirteen
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by THORN on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 06:50:42 AM AEST
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*claps*
That was fantastic. I could really feel it and the repetition works very well.
Reminds me very much of LINKIN PARK's style, those guys rock.
But for those who want it with the music, seriously - if you know you're music, notes will play in your head the 1st time you read it.
But back to the lyrics - great, keep writing!
Cheers,
-XxRayeXx |
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