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Let Me Lie To You
Contributed by
pyrofungus
on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 07:54:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Want to feel my heart beat
Feel the misery that lies within it?
Eyes so misguiding
That darkness can hide within them
No one will know
Hush
Never mind they wont be able to hear you anyways
Just keep breathing
Thats what Im trying to do
Can you see me struggling with living?
No one can
They wont know me for my sad side
They just see what they want to see
Not wanting to really know how I feel
But if they did
They wouldnt understand
Theyre poor precious hearts
Are far to innocent to feel such pain
So let me sit back and lie to you
About how I am today
Let me give a smile that I cannot seem to feel
Let me laugh so loudly
That I become sickened by such a fake sound
Just so you can sit back and pretend everythings fine
In your precious little world
Where things seem to be ok
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pyrofungus
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Re: Let Me Lie To You
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 08:06:41 PM AEST
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oh my god!!!! this is such an awesome write...the BEST ive read lately. its so true how people can be so selfish and not care how u feel inside. this was beautiful and thought provoking, i loved reading it
try and keep hopexxxoooxx
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Re: Let Me Lie To You
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 09:00:21 PM AEST
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| excellent write. they do say ignorance is bliss, but i say ignorance is a killer. since when did being stupid help anyone or themselves? oh well maybe one day they might get a reality check, doesnt really matter. its their ignorance to deal with. |
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Re: Let Me Lie To You
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by shy_band_geek on
Sunday, 16th January 2005 @ 06:03:27 PM AEST
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nice work...
I can relate on how you feel here.
nice job
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Re: Let Me Lie To You
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by kaleidoscope_glasses on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 11:24:19 AM AEST
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ur incite.........into the human psyche.........is truly startling
-megan (kaliedascope_glasses) |
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