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Shattering From Above
Contributed by
pyrofungus
on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 08:01:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Hurry down the street now
"Its raining
Its pouring"
The earth is shattering from above
Let me run
Let me jump
Im dancing in the rain
Its so cold
But it feels so good
Watch this ice fall from the sky
Its hitting me!
Yes it is
Look at the sky
Its so gray
Look at me Im already gray
I am like this sky
We relate to the core
Shattering and weeping
At the same time we slowly begin to cry
Look we are like nature
Twins to be exact
It heals
It feels
It deals all the same!
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Re: Shattering From Above
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by jjones12 on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 08:08:36 PM AEST
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| it's great! |
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Re: Shattering From Above
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 08:52:27 PM AEST
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| good write. this had some very creative verses. sometimes the best verses are the ones that only a few can think of. |
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Re: Shattering From Above
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by nail-to-the-head on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 08:52:35 PM AEST
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great write, vivid images while reading!
+ nail-to-the-head + |
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Re: Shattering From Above
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by Dragontear27 on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 10:34:26 PM AEST
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| Great stuff Summer, it explains the rain we've been having lately. Nicley done. |
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Re: Shattering From Above
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by Dragontear27 on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 10:37:14 PM AEST
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| Great stuff Summer. Describes the rain that we've been having lately. Really good poem to show the good side of rain, and a litle bit of how it could be depressing. ~~lates~~ |
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Re: Shattering From Above
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 06:17:19 AM AEST
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a very good write, well done
pixie xx |
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Re: Shattering From Above
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by Evilnn on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 04:25:45 PM AEST
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Beautifully written
Loved it
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