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A Prison With Walls of Eyes
Contributed by
Pocket
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Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 08:26:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Pinned to the corner of my mind
Frozen to the spot of lost time
Listening for footsteps on the stairs
And then I hear them,people who are not there
*Chorus*----I live in a prison with walls of eyes
Watching me with their glazed over look
I sleep in bed made of translucent ice
And I fall off with the roll of your dice
I've lain in fear on my floor
As I wait for a man to open my door
And then he does he procceeds to rape me
Then he's gone before I can flee
*********Chorus***********
I've watched through mirror
The faces inside
As their reflections get clearer
I'm rooted to the spot, I can't hide
*********Chorus************
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Re: A Prison With Walls of Eyes
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by nail-to-the-head on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 08:42:41 PM AEST
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| great write, keep it up! |
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Re: A Prison With Walls of Eyes
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 08:43:19 PM AEST
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| very well written. very unique and well put in all ways. very creative. |
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Re: A Prison With Walls of Eyes
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by MorbidDeath on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 11:31:52 PM AEST
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| loved it seemed very personal i could totally relate to your first verse keep writing |
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