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Lyssa's Poem
Contributed by
luna_mica
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Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 10:12:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You said your dreams had fallen,
You said you needed a break,
You said your dreams lay broken,
And I could do nothing but wait.
I was scared, but I couldn't say,
I saw your anguish and pain,
I said "Don't let the hope slip away"
From despair's windowpane.
You said you felt so alone,
You were so isolated,
You said no one would take you in,
And you couldn't take it.
I wanted so much to help you,
I needed to give you aid,
I was so far away from you,
So I can do nothing but wait
Until I can finally help you,
Ease your shoulders of the weight,
I'll try so hard to save you,
Please don't let me be too late.
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luna_mica
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2005-01-10 22:12:40]
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Re: Lyssa's Poem
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 10:54:25 PM AEST
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| This was very sweet. "Despair's windowpane" is a little awkward, but other than that, this is real good. Cheers! |
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Re: Lyssa's Poem
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by luna_mica on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 10:58:00 PM AEST
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| the "despair's windowpane" part was something that i had talked to her about. she would understand, and i wrote this for her anyways. |
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Re: Lyssa's Poem
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by eyes-of-love on
Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 07:42:06 AM AEST
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| Amazing poem somewhat a little sad.. but great writing |
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