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HER NAME
Contributed by
hellsfallenangel
on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 09:01:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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In my heart her name is said loud, her name is praised above all others... I wish she knew her name was in my heart. In my heart she'll always be.
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hellsfallenangel
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2005-01-11 09:01:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: HER NAME
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 09:30:51 AM AEST (User
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Good start of what could become something longer. Divide into phrases, as *most* poetry is meant to be read a line at a time. Cheers! |
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Re: HER NAME
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 07:44:46 PM AEST (User
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Sweet write. She must have really meant a lot to you. |
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Re: HER NAME
(User Rating: 1 ) by karmen on
Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 10:13:07 PM AEST (User
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its really a good start of emotion for what could be a longer wrote out poem... its good! |
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Re: HER NAME
(User Rating: 1 ) by Giggles1989 on
Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 07:28:36 AM AEST (User
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awww. I like this one who is it about?
stephanie
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Re: HER NAME
(User Rating: 1 ) by justme03 on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 11:18:43 AM AEST (User
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aww
thats sweet and beautiful
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