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R.I.P
Contributed by
allymp
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Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 02:46:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I sat there and stared
Not knowing what to do
The room was filled with sorrow
And the air overcome with gloom
I guess i was just in shock
That her life was over and done
And then it suddenly hit me
That her battle had been won
Her life was not an easy one
But she always stood up tall
No matter how many burdens
Never did she fall
She was always wonderful to everyone
And she'll always be in our hearts
All i can say is "Aunt Paulma, I love you"
No matter how far apart
Rest in peace
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allymp
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2005-01-11 14:46:46]
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Re: R.I.P
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by afterdark on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 03:01:59 PM AEST
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| Very good write |
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Re: R.I.P
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by Kay-Kay on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 03:42:33 PM AEST
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this poem made me think about when i lost sum one close to me not long ago it brought tears to my eyes....fantastic write i love the emotion keep up the great work!
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Re: R.I.P
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 08:57:47 PM AEST
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| Beautiful write. |
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Re: R.I.P
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by Sinned on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 03:39:17 PM AEST
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Aw Allymp
So sorry to hear of your loss. This poem is a nice tribute to your Aunt and you wrote it well.
When you pray talk to her too--if she helped you on earth--how much more can se help you now--going before our God. Yes I think He listens.Keep writing.
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