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I hope this lasts
Contributed by
brok3nxstar
on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 05:28:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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And summer wind fades into long autumn nights
the cold crisp breeze stings my tear drawn face
as i drift into the night alone
the miles between us picks at our hearts
and we feel the cruel sting of reality
i close my eys and try to see your face
but its distant, and slowly fading away
"i hope this lasts" continues to ring in my head
as i continue to drift
"it has to, it has to" i repeat to myself
the good times and memories dance in my head
and as the breeze runs its fingers
through my dark, and ratty hair
your picture comes cleary in sight
i feel your heart, your prescence, in mine
and that lets me know that your here... forever
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2005-01-11 17:28:35]
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Re: I hope this lasts
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by bonita2689 on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 05:35:49 PM AEST
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| Oooh this gave me shivers..Exactly how I'm feeling right now. You nailed this one... |
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Re: I hope this lasts
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by afterdark on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 05:42:05 PM AEST
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| Perhaps for you..It will |
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Re: I hope this lasts
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by Rhymingron on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 05:43:30 PM AEST
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| I like it. |
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Re: I hope this lasts
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 09:59:50 PM AEST
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Great write!
The imagery is so good. |
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