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Contributed by
LolitaMarionette
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Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 07:37:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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Sliding past my lips
Sweet ecstasy visit me again
Serotonin going hay wire
Chaos in my brain.
I feel this sweet high
Watching the lights dance
Tripping, rolling,
Stuck in this trance.
Dancing about wildly
Pupils grown quite wide
Though I make a fool of myself
I am stricken with pride.
Sneaking back into the house
Another night gone well
Once things are in order
I will slip back into the spell.
Money wasted on petty fun
All is well for now
Yet my brain slowly dying
But my mind will allow.
Psychological dependence
Stuck in this fantasy world
Mind standing still
Brain begins to be swirled.
Slowly losing energy
My brain is dying
My teenaged fun
Is my older trying.
The high was good for a time
But now I regret
When you're so young
You can't notice the treat.
All energy is drained
Nothing more than a dud
No worries now
For I'm buried in the mud.
Copyright ©
LolitaMarionette
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by Unheard_Mute on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 07:42:17 PM AEST
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| very nice poem, especially since it's spontanious... I worry about krystal too |
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by waos on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 07:42:47 PM AEST
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That was good. Though I've never done drugs,
I think you've portrayed pretty accurately
what it's like to go through that.
Good job, an the rhyme scheme doesn't get
very off track :P
~waos |
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by Sirena_Degana on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 07:45:14 PM AEST
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| and no wonder there's things such as shroom hors, and x-hors...and other sorts of stuff..but WOWOWOWOWO u explained this tremendously well! |
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by LevyMetal on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 07:52:06 PM AEST
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| I loved the third stanza. |
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by LevyMetal on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 07:52:39 PM AEST
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| I loved the third stanza. |
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Re: x
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 09:36:11 PM AEST
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| great poem. |
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