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Then, Now, Compare and Contrast
Contributed by
ophelia
on
Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 08:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Can't understand why
this world spins this way
don't know the tears I cry
can't acknowledge words you say
My life changes with the seasons
I fight with thunder & rain
Never for good reasons
Hurricanes inside drive me insane
Holding onto the past
dancing in my dreams
then, now, compare & contrast
always waking it up it seems
Can you? Will you save my soul
Will you always be there
when life takes it's toll
And the storms strip me bare
When my hearts lost at sea
and the tide won't come in
when I'm nothing but empty
Will you always try again?
Will you forever read my poetry
even if it's down and out
Can you set my words free
and without reasonable doubt?
Copyright ©
ophelia
... [
2002-12-04 20:00:00]
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Re: Then, Now, Compare and Contrast
(User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on
Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 12:25:37 AM AEST
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I could almost get a lyrical feeling out of this one.....i enjoyed this one alot...it's beautuifully written...i love the ending ...thanks for sharing it..
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