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No-One Asked Nicole
Contributed by
nicolettea
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Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 01:08:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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How are you feeling? No-one asked Nicole.
Helpless, lost and misunderstood.
Out of control and bewildered.
Forgotten, looked over, not very good.
What are you doing? No-one asked Nicole.
Hiding, theyre coming after me.
Like yesterday and before and all of this year,
They come and they like to hurt me.
What do they call you? No-one asked Nicole.
Ugly, Fat slut, Stupid, and Freak.
Relentlessly till I believe it myself,
In the mirror I pour over my physique.
What do you look like? No-one asked Nicole.
That girl in the mirrors not me.
Face gaunt and so pale, body bloated and large,
Im ugly, so ugly, its painful to see.
How are you feeling? No-one asked Nicole.
Sick to my stomach, inside.
My heart aches and I need to talk about it,
But theres no one in whom I confide.
What are you doing? No-one asked Nicole.
Cutting my arm with this knife.
The pain it brings on is nothing compared,
To the pain in my everyday life.
Why do you do it? No-one asked Nicole.
Because these tiny red drops
Prove to myself, that I can control,
When the pain commences and stops.
Whats that on your arm? No-one asked Nicole.
Its nothing, sleeves cover the lines.
It may be hot, but I cope all day long.
Hiding these tell-tale signs.
Please will you stop this? No-one asked Nicole.
Not now, I am too far away.
Each slice of the knife pushes me further.
From the torment I receive evryday.
How can I help you? No-one asked Nicole.
You cant, today is too late.
If youd asked earlier I would be alright.
Now death is my certain fate.
Why are you dying? No-one asked Nicole.
Because Im unloved and unaided.
Because I was bullied, because I am fat.
Because who I am has now faded.
Are you here daughter? No-one asked Nicole.
No mum, Im far, far from here.
Just like you were, when I needed you most,
When I wanted to tell you my fear.
How are you feeling? No-one asked Nicole.
Free, like the load has been lifted.
Betrayal and hate are leaving me slowly.
In these last moments, through thoughts I have sifted.
Where are you going? No-one asked Nicole.
Im flying, towards the white light.
The place I am going is better than here,
I can rest from this long, weary fight.
Copyright ©
nicolettea
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2005-01-12 01:08:05]
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Re: No-One Asked Nicole
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by nicolettea on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 01:26:54 AM AEST
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| TRALALA |
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Re: No-One Asked Nicole
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 02:39:18 AM AEST
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On the contrary, I think its based on suicide, cutting, feeling marginalised, bullied, unwanted, unheard, unloved and unnoticed - I think the way you personalised the 'No-one' into the only person who listened was clever.
An encouraging, yet discouraging first submission, at the same time.
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Re: No-One Asked Nicole
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by nicolettea on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 04:12:11 AM AEST
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thanks neptune. i was really nervous to put this online. only a few people have read it. i dont write much poetry. thanks for commenting it means soooo much to me :)
(i just wrote tralala because the server wasnt working and i was testing it. oh well. tralalalalololo :) ) |
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Re: No-One Asked Nicole
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by nicolettea on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 04:17:24 AM AEST
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| yeh its based on those things, but i meant its not based on a friend's or a personal experience, thank god. its just something i could imagine. |
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Re: No-One Asked Nicole
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 05:55:54 AM AEST
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| wow... this is amazing *speechless* well done... whoa... |
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Re: No-One Asked Nicole
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by nicolettea on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 06:10:39 AM AEST
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| thanks so much :):):) uv made me so happy |
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Re: No-One Asked Nicole
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by hellsfallenangel on
Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 02:15:00 PM AEST
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i like it its very good read some of mine k g2g bye
DEMON |
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Re: No-One Asked Nicole
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by Dark_Oleander on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 09:01:58 PM AEST
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This is true talent...Good job!!!!
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