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Sand Castles
Contributed by
Jezabel
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Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 08:26:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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You would't know.
Our hearts could mingle
In a seaweed paradise
Diving ever on.
But they shouldn't.
I walk the boardwalk
Sand-encrusted sandals
Heart in hand
For that pocket
Of your ragged jacket
Stopping by
For ice cream
In warm wind.
We discussed this
Some future date
In sailing dreams
Unburdened.
Touching
We spent one day
In waves.
But I said
I couldn't stay.
Here I am
Anyhow
Hiding
In plain sight
On the sand.
Copyright ©
Jezabel
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2005-01-12 08:26:44]
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Re: Sand Castles
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 08:28:35 AM AEST
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that was a lovely poem, really lovely
5/5
pixie xx |
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Re: Sand Castles
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 08:52:27 AM AEST
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This conjured all kinds of interesting images. I love the mystery of it and the obviousness juxtaposed. Lovely.
Stitch |
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Re: Sand Castles
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by autumngreeneyes on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 09:55:44 AM AEST
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Heart in hand
For that pocket
Of your ragged jacket
Stopping by
For ice cream
In warm wind.
that was lovely... |
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