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Will Anyone Remember?
Contributed by
Daniels_Princess
on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 03:13:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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As I lie on this bed
Dying, crying
Seeking for console
But finding only agony
My mind is wondering
Im confused but pondering
The existence of my soul
As death takes its toll
Im a fugitive
Running from my life
Escaping somehow
Digging a deeper hole
Im being enticed
Into this dark world
Slowly slipping away
From misery and pain
I whisper my last wish
My soft lips give my last kiss
And I wonder, for the rest of time
Will anyone remember this crime?
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Daniels_Princess
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2005-01-12 15:13:58]
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Re: Will Anyone Remember?
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by wolfman on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 03:21:14 PM AEST
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a quick thought about taking ones life, yes there are those who would rember and rember well they would of what went wrong and if there was something that they could have done or did.
this was a good poem easy to read and very simple I did enjoy reading it please post again soon
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Re: Will Anyone Remember?
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by Daniels_Princess on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 03:32:51 PM AEST
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| Thanks for the comment and the reply. I try to write about what people could relate to. Alot of people who have the thoughts of suicide wonder if anyone would even care..and this was what I was feeling at the time, also. |
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Re: Will Anyone Remember?
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by Spazzo on
Sunday, 27th February 2005 @ 11:04:47 PM AEST
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Hehe, a repost. Still a great write. Hehe. And people will remember, people will cry.
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