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Salt Water In The Eyes Of Tragedy
Contributed by
Diatribe
on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 05:45:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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teach me how to swim
so that i can wade this ocean
without breathing in the salt water...
and teach me how to die just right
because I don't want to be alone any longer.
and when you see my back to the sky
from that birds eye view
know that i've reached euphoria
my lungs accept the liquid
and there is no more hysteria
I pray that my body sinks to the bottom
so it may never be seen again
but it's no use praying
when there's nothing worth believing in
excuse me while i repent...
"forgive me Lord, for you have sinned...
it has occured to me that you are not so omnipotent,
but weak for allowing all this evil in
so i guess it's safe to say
that we're created in your image
faulty by design...
in other words imperfect... Amen."
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Re: Salt Water In The Eyes Of Tragedy
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by afterdark on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 06:27:41 PM AEST
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| Almost alwasy I do not like th is type of poetry..But the title and the flow really was very very good..Great job |
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