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Don't Let Go
Contributed by
LolitaMarionette
on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 05:48:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I wish I could fall asleep in your arms
Be dazzled by your many charms
I want you to hold on and never let go
I want your feelings to show
I want you to cuddle
When cold, we can huddle
We can leave this place
Stuck in each others embrace
Dont let go, no dont let go
We can stay together
Through all kinds of weather
Throughout the ages
Our book of many pages
Our love will live on
Even when were gone
Forever through time
Just like this rhyme
Dont let go, no dont let go
Our song will never end
Together we will blend
Forever as one
Well never be done
Hold me tight
All through the night
If you do this, Ill do the same
Our love burning like a flame
Dont let go...no dont let go
Copyright ©
LolitaMarionette
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2005-01-12 17:48:57]
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Re: Don't Let Go
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by wetnwild on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 06:14:36 PM AEST
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Hey great poem! I can totaly relate! Keep up the good work!
Luv, wetnwild |
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Re: Don't Let Go
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by Unheard_Mute on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 10:03:22 PM AEST
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another great one hannah...
I felt something hurting as I read this... it reminded me of what I used to want... the black and pink... silly dreams, I gave up on those... but at least I know it's true now... or at least can happen...
anyway, it's obvious I don't look for such things anymore, she doesn't need me, but she's with me... I'll settle for that... he was lucky hannah, that's why he's so sad all the time, that's why he's depressed, he knows he lost something good... good write |
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Re: Don't Let Go
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by O7NeVeS on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 02:06:41 AM AEST
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| I really liked this poem, and how it flowed. TD |
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Re: Don't Let Go
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by prozac_memory on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 07:49:15 AM AEST
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good write.
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