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Mirrored Image
Contributed by
hoist1atca
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Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 06:02:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I know the ache within your troubled heart-
It is there hidden behind your saddened eyes-
I can see the tears that your spirit has to shed-
I feel the pain that bears upon your uneasy soul…
Within the corridors of a tormented mind-
Clouded images of one whom no longer exist-
Pursued eternally by the demons that tear the soul-
And leave the pain of an absent past in the present…
Behind a wavering smile you try to hide your fear-
Yet still I hear the trembling in the words you speak-
For you know that a new day must surely come-
And your mind cannot deny your irresolute future…
What once was shall never again be-
The peace that joined the mind, heart and soul-
Lost forever in an endless sea of confusion and turmoil-
Now reveals only a mirrored image behind the looking glass…
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Re: Mirrored Image
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 06:06:19 PM AEST
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| Powerful write, full or portents. Thanks so much for posting this! Blessings. |
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Re: Mirrored Image
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by DesolantDreamer on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 06:33:34 PM AEST
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| Awsome. No words can describe the feelings that flow through me even now after reading this. Very powerful. I know those feelings that you mentioned all to well. Very Very Good. |
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Re: Mirrored Image
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 08:04:03 PM AEST
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| very nice, very nice indeed. the only part i didnt like about this was that it reminded me of the book, beyond the looking glass. |
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Re: Mirrored Image
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by candysears on
Thursday, 6th October 2005 @ 09:22:23 PM AEST
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Great write..
God Bless! |
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Re: Mirrored Image
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by doeyd on
Wednesday, 29th September 2010 @ 10:48:36 AM AEST
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| nice |
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