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Lies....Lies...Lies
Contributed by
lostlady38
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Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 08:42:03 PM in AEST
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Every time you speak that's what you do
Lie....Lie...Lie...
Do you do this to everyone or just to me?
Lie...Lie...Lie...
I've learned that when you talk
It's best not to listen
Since you can't tell the truth.
This world is awful enough with you in it
But knowing that every word you speak is false
Makes it even more unpleasant
Lies..Lies...Lies
Someday, someone will beat you at your own game
Then you will know how it really feels to hear---
Lies...Lies...Lies.
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Re: Lies....Lies...Lies
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 08:47:13 PM AEST
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| Well you've let out a lot of anger here, that's for sure. Cathartic, at the very least. Nice write. |
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Re: Lies....Lies...Lies
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by afterdark on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 08:54:27 PM AEST
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| It is better to get it out this way trust me |
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Re: Lies....Lies...Lies
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by mina-1 on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 11:24:38 PM AEST
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my dear friend what can i say , another great write.
Release ur anger and make urself heard.
Go girl!
luv,
Sue |
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Re: Lies....Lies...Lies
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by kidpoet_213 on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 12:31:17 AM AEST
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Yes... better to get it out then let it lie festering inside. This is a good write... and I can relate... as we probably all can... You did good...
~Donna~ |
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Re: Lies....Lies...Lies
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 01:56:14 AM AEST
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I know what you mean, i like the way you vented with this poem. Good write.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: Lies....Lies...Lies
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th January 2005 @ 07:22:13 PM AEST
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| Great write. It'll all come back to this person with time. It's good you got your feelings out. |
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