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LATE AGAIN
Contributed by
tawakwan
on
Wednesday, 12th January 2005 @ 10:46:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
HumorPoetry
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Standing at the platform like a thoroughbred at the starting gate.
The bell sounds,the gate opens,and the rush is on.
You fight to get inside to maintain the rail.
evil eyes are everywhere.
unpleasant oders invade your senses.
It's a race against time..Suddenly all motion stops.
Looks of anguish and anxiety trade places.
A voice announces a rain check.
Moaning....
Then abandenment..On to another track.
Now your behind. The clock is ticking.
Another starting gate,another sound of the bell,another rush.
You fight for the rail.
Motion.
Relief.
Late again.
Damn.................................
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tawakwan
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Re: LATE AGAIN
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 01:48:43 AM AEST
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LMAO i so know what you mean, hates comuting to work. Good write.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: LATE AGAIN
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by autumngreeneyes on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 02:08:31 AM AEST
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| miss one..miss em all...great, I loved it. |
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