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I'm Trying
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 05:42:09 AM in AEST
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I promise you my love I am trying,
It is hard so I sit here crying,
My soul is being pulled left to right,
I feel just like giving up on my fight.
Feel like letting the demons win,
Letting them eat me from my soul within,
I want to throw myself into the shadows,
As my corridors of sanity are so narrow.
Im trying to stop being the old me,
I just want to set us both free,
Feels like I have 2 people in my brain,
Pushing & pulling, driving me insane.
One tells me to fight & to be strong,
One is trying to kill me & drown out my song,
Tow personalities inside one head,
One wants to help whereas one wants me dead.
I struggle & battle with each ticking second,
Into the abyss I am always being beckoned,
By the dark half of my personality,
I have never known that of normality.
Only when I am with you do I feel well,
You are the angel that released me from hell,
Please dont hate me for I am trying my best,
Please dont let my demons lay me to rest.
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pixie
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Re: I'm Trying
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 05:54:58 AM AEST
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All i can say is WOW WOW WOW!! that was really something Krissie, i really loved this write. Its so emotional and beautiful at the same time.
Great poem as always,
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: I'm Trying
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by ButchCorpuz on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 06:05:15 AM AEST
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Well, since you've come so far with your struggle, I say never give up 'till you beat the hell out of your demons! Very good poem!
-Butch |
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Re: I'm Trying
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by Arsenic on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 06:25:13 AM AEST
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And some folks don’t believe in supernatural because they can’t “see” the demons who hunt us. Such blindness! This is a great description of ongoing struggles that tug our very souls. Yes, demons are real, as is both good and evil. Thanks for sharing.
Arsenic
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Re: I'm Trying
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 06:53:56 AM AEST
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| Pixie, this is so emotional. Another one of yours where I *think* I know what it feels like. Blessings! |
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Re: I'm Trying
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by givingin on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 08:07:46 AM AEST
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Verygood poem pixie!
I really enjoyed reading this one,
I also fight with my own demons, as do many of us. But I have learned that with family and with firends (like the people at YPDC) I have over come almost all my demons, except one................
So never give up the fight and keep on batteling, for in the end.......YOU will win :)
great write
*~givingin~* |
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Re: I'm Trying
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by 307luvs09 on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 09:04:13 AM AEST
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| YO! Pixie. How was the pub last night. This is tight. Love the emotion and the stuggle is clear. You got what it takes lady. I can feel this straight to the bone. Don't give up. Love is strange, yet powerful enough to change lives. talk to you soon!! 307 |
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Re: I'm Trying
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by sean88 on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 11:43:42 AM AEST
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Great write! just like all of your poems :) keep it up!
sean xxx |
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Re: I'm Trying
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by afterdark on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 05:22:10 AM AEST
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| this was another one i really could feel in every line..good write hun. |
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Re: I'm Trying
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 09:37:49 AM AEST
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beautifuly written, and verry touching, your writting
is the key 2 your sucess in keeping the demons in tacted, i'd say your on the winning end . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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