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Sad man
Contributed by
Jezabel
on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 09:15:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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In mourning
For
Your desire.
Resurrect
If I could
With passion
Tender lips
Swiveled hips
charm to spare.
But no,
Lost to me
You are.
I walk by.
Do you see?
No.
Others turn
And look
And want.
Not you.
Someday maybe
You'll know
What you
passed over.
But not now.
Sad man.
Copyright ©
Jezabel
... [
2005-01-13 09:15:08]
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Re: Sad man
(User Rating: 1 )
by Dri on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 01:48:53 PM AEST
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| this is so beautiful... i love the flow... good work! |
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Re: Sad man
(User Rating: 1 )
by waos on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 01:56:44 PM AEST
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The best part of this poem is definitely the line arrangement, you
did a good job on that. I enjoyed readin this. Keep it up.
~Waos/Kara |
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