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The Venus of My Heart
Contributed by
wordpoet
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Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 02:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My lifes about the journey and striving for a goal,
Without this perfect purpose I dont know where Id go.
The target cant be chosen, its often predefined,
And once youve found perfection, its always on your mind.
So I cant deny my passion, my longing or desire,
Or deny my feelings for the one who sets my soul on fire.
Escape is not an option, Im captured for all time,
As I try in vain to tell the tale through the longing of my rhyme.
This poem's my confession about my one true love,
Its as though she has been sent to me from somewhere up above.
Her features are so beautiful, a vision to behold,
To describe her would take volumes and never can be told,
An angel without wings, soft features full of grace,
The Venus of my heart, I know I cant replace,
So I hope you understand that its you Im living for,
You are the meaning of my soul, theres no one I love more.
By: Doug Morton
http://wordpoet.tripod.com
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Re: The Venus of My Heart
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by OreO on
Thursday, 5th December 2002 @ 03:11:41 AM AEST
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This is such a beautiful expression of how you feel for this person....it's absolutely beautiful hope she see's it...
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Re: The Venus of My Heart
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 7th December 2002 @ 09:40:03 AM AEST
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| Doug, your writes always have such a perfect flow and rhythm. A very warm and emotional write as always. Well done again!! Larry |
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Re: The Venus of My Heart
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by mckayla on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 02:20:03 PM AEST
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beautiful writting!
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