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Crying
Contributed by
lostinside
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Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 11:49:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Shes crying
Sitting in her room
Looking out the window
Tears in her eyes
Shes crying
Hoping for a new begin
Hoping for an ending
An ending of the pain
Why would she stop her life
Why would she go on
Why would she stop with crying
And why should she smile
These questions in her head
Theyre killing her inside
She doesnt have the answers
She doesnt have the time
She is still crying
Bleeding inside
Killing herself
Waiting for time
But no one sees it
Shes the populair girl
Everyone likes her
But no one cares
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lostinside
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2005-01-13 11:49:53]
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Re: Crying
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by autumngreeneyes on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 11:58:05 AM AEST
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| I don't know what to say here..it kind of takes my breath away and leaves me speechless.. I know people like this. It's a facade..great job. |
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Re: Crying
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by pixie on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 03:02:24 PM AEST
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deep and very emotionally charged, expressed well,
pix xx |
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Re: Crying
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by humboldtsweetie33 on
Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 10:28:38 PM AEST
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| it sounds like it could be a song. good write |
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