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Passing Rose
Contributed by
jace
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Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 01:09:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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How am i just suposed to forget you?!
How can I just let you go
How can I regret al these memories we share...
Though they may bring me pain now that it's over
and though they may salt down my wounds
they are the most beautifull blessing that reminds me
I was once happy
Though the days are cold and
Alone myself i hold
I can still think back when I observed you sip your
super sweet cappacino
and when we did first meet
And how I loved walking alone with you on that street
on a chilly october morning.
I may be alone now
And I may never see you
but the memories will always remain
and no one can take that away
And event though I must move on
I still want to wash in this old bath water
and revell in what was once perfect
but is stale and brocken
the wind has blown it away
And i wil search ever after for it.
You may be gone
but you will always be in me
and that is not allways a good thing
when I am down you will haunt me of when I was happy
and when I am lonely you will remind me of when I had friends.
all these voices in my head are adding up and they wont go away.
They keep taunting me
and teasing me
and were has my refuge gone
I have burried my own refuge and
briges I have burnt
Fire has consumed my exits and the safety
of your bossom was irrelevent
and partial
now I see were i stand and I see I
stand on nothng
but I do not fall
But I will
I will
So please my darling dont let me forget you
you are now part of me and forever mine to keep and hold
dear for ever, I am in love and there is nohing you can do
there is no way out
And I understand howit feels to be hounded by another that you dont want
as a lover I can not let common sence get in the way though
It will ruin all that I have allready destroyed and
all my facultys are allready fried so what is there left to loose
I will open my aarms wide and welcome disaster
So let winter come and let my arms clutch myself
and let friends gather and comfort you and I hope I have not hurt you but I
hope you can laugh me off and
shake it off
For I am meaningless in your life so please don't pay attention..
just let me go on dreaming and surviving in my own lonliness
Let it end now and let me never of survived this intoxicating
love let me pass fo it's intensity is to great to come up missing
and I can not find it for I have allready streched a hole
in my chest for it and now that it is gone,
I feel a chiiling breeze that makes me insecure...
Copyright ©
jace
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2005-01-13 13:09:03]
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Re: Passing Rose
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by autumngreeneyes on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 01:58:49 PM AEST
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| Lots of grammatical errors, and it was so long and rambling..it takes away from the beauty that would be there otherwise..if you check the mods spell check box that might help, too.. although they haven't been catching my spelling mistakes lately??? |
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Re: Passing Rose
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by prozac_memory on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 03:54:56 PM AEST
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i think this is a lovely poem.
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Re: Passing Rose
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by jace on
Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 12:21:36 PM AEST
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My apollogy for rambling, I was just rying to get it out there
I do appreciate your comment I will try and fix it when I get time |
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