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An Untitled Look into Love
Contributed by
bugoron
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Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 01:29:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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How fragile is this thing, this 'love,'
Just like a frozen lake of ice,
The first few steps are terrifying,
But the next come easier with time.
Most of that time is spent gliding
Happily, smoothly,
But just as ice, love can be thin,
We sometimes break the tiny layer,
Fall into the desparaging depths,
The icy waters of fear that choke and strangle.
Have I hurt you?
Have I wronged you?
The fear is sickening.
I don't want to lose you,
Please, please forgive me.
Light begins to darken,
But then we're saved.
Who saved us?
Our love, ironically enough.
Pulled from the suffocating sorrow,
Wrapped in a warm blanket of love.
We are forgiven.
Why?
Because we are loved.
Copyright ©
bugoron
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2005-01-13 13:29:06]
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Re: An Untitled Look into Love
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 02:36:11 PM AEST
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| Sweet and so true. Blessings! |
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Re: An Untitled Look into Love
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by autumngreeneyes on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 02:36:23 PM AEST
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| I could feel the ice cracking..feel the cold..and then was glad for the warmth at the end..:-) |
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Re: An Untitled Look into Love
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by breny on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 06:39:31 PM AEST
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great comparison! i would have never looked at love like that but after reading this i can see how the two relate. great topic and even better poem.
Brenna |
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