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Nightmare Dream
Contributed by
LucisLucy
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Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 02:56:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Right out behind the willow trees
Where once there was a honey-suckle honey breeze
Where once all love used to reign
But now its not at all the same
Darkness lurking through the wind
Looking for those whove sinned
Feasting on its damn-ed prey
Eating whatever is in its way
Now here comes the very worst part
It lies at the pitiless pit of your heart
Where your punished for your dreadful sins
But then
The nightmare ends
As soon as the nightmare begins
Copyright ©
LucisLucy
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2005-01-13 14:56:43]
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Re: Nightmare Dream
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by afterdark on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 03:32:57 PM AEST
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| This is a very good post..Thanks |
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Re: Nightmare Dream
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 07:42:54 PM AEST
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| ah very good ending. the ending is one of the most important parts of a poem. all that is said before is important, because if it is not good enough to read to the ending, then the best ending is never read, but your piece had the best of both worlds. |
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