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Alone
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 03:09:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Here I sit all alone in my room,
Waiting to disappear into the gloom,
Waiting for someone to answer my request,
From all my pain I want to be undressed.
I can hear all the insignificant, little sounds,
That you dont notice when others are around,
Pipes banging, clocks ticking, my breathing,
In the background I hear my heartache & pain conceiving.
They never let me see where they hide,
Only in each other do they confide,
They say twos a couple, threes a crowd,
So in their little group I am not allowed.
They whisper about me of that I am sure,
If they see me coming they slam the door,
I hear them on the other side laughing at me,
Poking fun because you both I can not see.
Please let me in, confide in me too,
I know that I can also be like the two of you,
I would like to make friends with my demons, my horrors,
As it will bring a brighter tomorrow.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2005-01-13 15:09:20]
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Re: Alone
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by afterdark on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 03:29:57 PM AEST
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| Yet anonther great to add to your collection.. |
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Re: Alone
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by autumngreeneyes on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 03:55:56 PM AEST
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| wow pix.. conspiring against you..that's just what I'd name it too..the Conspiracy.. this is one of your best, I think..(cheers..to that I'll drink) |
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Re: Alone
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by shy_band_geek on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 04:49:13 PM AEST
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wow. nice job. This actually kinda says how i've been feeling recently.
Good job. |
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Re: Alone
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by StarryNightsIV on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 05:00:58 PM AEST
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| very powerful and emotional right, this really hits home iyt sounds ecatly like what I've gone through and you conyeyed your emotions well. excellent job |
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Re: Alone
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 06:05:08 PM AEST
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pixie dear your poetry packs a powerful punch .So much emotions and sadness.
You write how i feel sometimes .great job.
hugs |
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Re: Alone
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by Dawny on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 06:33:46 AM AEST
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Goyya say this sums up how I feel sometimes, very powerful stuff pixie.
Love Dawny xxx |
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Re: Alone
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by givingin on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 08:15:36 AM AEST
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Another great emotional write pixie.
Great job,
hope you feel better.
*~givingin~* |
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Re: Alone
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 09:30:03 AM AEST
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once again your sincere and beautiful writting has
grace these pages, u r a literary gem pixie 2 say
the least . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Alone
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 04:52:10 AM AEST
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Wow this is such a sad powerfull write.
You have writen your emotions very well and it really does make you think a lot.
Very good write as always Pix
Jane x |
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Re: Alone
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 01:30:13 PM AEST
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Aww sweetie. You're not toally alone, you have us..
I understand though, I really do.
Such a sad heartwrenching write..
I'm always here if you need me, K?
Love ya!
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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