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Polioencephalomyelitis
Contributed by
savingmarion
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Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 07:42:18 PM in AEST
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The staggered scent of choking,
Pulses throughout his veins.
Ive heard this knocking before.
Ignored and tortured;
This strung out and irrational facsimile,
Gasps for air but only gets the anxiety.
Hes only driftwood on a marquee murex.
Superaqual and dropping by the second,
His sirens and whistles cry,
Mayday,
And he calls to God with his last breathe.
He says, Poison crawls and abandonment is lucid.
Dredge the melancholy, polder shell of a cortex,
And make me the architect,
Of the evanescent welding,
Of wisdom and hemoglobin.
I scream in black and green,
But all I want is to cry in yellow.
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savingmarion
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2005-01-13 19:42:18]
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Re: Polioencephalomyelitis
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by afterdark on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 07:47:44 PM AEST
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| Not really sure what kind of comment to leave here.. |
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Re: Polioencephalomyelitis
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by DesperateSoul on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 08:39:26 PM AEST
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| Oh My Gawwdd!!! Freakin Excellent!! I love these type of poems the ones that make you say dammmnnn what was this person thinking!! I have moments like these in my writing all the time!! Maybe i should be bold and post some of em?!... Even if they are a little out there!! Thanks 4 the inspiration!! Great write!! Keep writing and posting always!! D.$*~ |
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Re: Polioencephalomyelitis
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 09:28:11 PM AEST
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| wow, those comments were crazy, but i have to say i agree with them. interesting poem, worth the time to ponder. |
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Re: Polioencephalomyelitis
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by visualizing_life on
Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 11:43:19 AM AEST
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| very good imagry...it paints a picture for me and i like that...good words, strong and abrassive |
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